Writing task 2

Topic:

“In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work.  Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.”

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people regard this as completely wrong because children is suppose to go to school and let their parents feed for them. Children under 18 should not allowed to work because it is illegal in some countries. In addition, children tend to forget their studies or not doing their homeworks in just trying to find money. And it will cause them failed in their class, the result is student might hate school and loss their appetite in going school everyday. And we will notice someday that more children are not educated and it will cause seriously problem in our society. On the other hand, some people consider it as valuable experience, it’s true, it is better for our children to know how to find money and feed theirselves so that someday when they are alone they will know how to live. They will become independent and know how to budget and minimize their daily expenses. Most of the children doing like this are most likely to succeed ’cause they are already trained since they were young. My opinion is that, we have to send our children to their school, that’s the first priority and then let them work if you think they can do both things – work and study. And guide them, watch them ’cause they’re still under your responsibility.

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2 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by ANGELFIRE on October 25, 2010 at 8:07 PM

    I am not satisfied with it.

  2. Posted by ANGELFIRE on October 25, 2010 at 8:09 PM

    Also Can you add some more Speaking samples and it would be perfect if you could add about , controversial topics.

    With regards ANGELFIRE

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